I thought you essay was really well written and I felt that you really answer the entire prompt fully and effectively! I thought that you added some great multimodal aspects and I really enjoyed your pictures, the bolded font, your narrative audio, as well as how you arranged everything on the page to add an interesting spatial aspects.  I think that the only major thing that I would work on in you paper besides form minor grammatical errors and flow was introducing “the judge.” I feel like this was the only part of you paper that I got hung up on. I think that by introducing “the judge” by saying “Nassau Country, police officer, detective and judge, “the judge” or something like that would make it more clear to the reader who you are talking about and why he is important to your paper. But overall I thought you did a really great job and I enjoyed reading your paper.